|Notes=Anne sent comments to Jake 11/3. Jake to revise & send for peer editing. 2/13 Catherine Kirby to look at Jake's last draft and see what more needs to be done.
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Link to google doc : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1COY0nejVzkuw7646FGTBpbUSL8qh3B4qwgkmYkTfBRw